My composition(Revenge is not the cure)

Verse 1:
Oh,(his name)
im sorry...i didn't mean to hurt your feelings
Neither did i know how it'd all end up like this
It wasn't true,I'd probably leave u alone by now.
im frozen like a stone in my mind...im only thinking of you but what can i do..
I'd probably have to leave you...

Chorus:
Although we didn't know each other...
its like we've been before
And so im really sorry to smoulder
Im trying my best to do
to forget you...
You already got her..
and now i'd probably leave u alone...:]

Verse 2:
I know im bugging u but,this is all the end...
I could just live free and...
Forget all those of you and me cuz it wouldn't really happen:]
And now just to think that I couldn't really have been and
SHOULDN'T REALLY HAVE SEEN U!!

(cHORUS)

BRIDGE:
you're just a part of me now,I can't let you go...
I don't even seem to know how?!
Could someone please show....me
cause i'd probably lost my way and it really the place
seems so dark and empty
To me...
Where am i??
where have i beeeeeen....?
I was dreaming in my own land a place where it all seems
that things are just a fantasy and it'd really be...
just so happening to me....

(chorus)x2
leave u alone....





Hey,hey...hi:]do i seem happy?Well not really....just hyper,hehehe...But above is my lyrics to forget bout someone but im tryin to...So enjoy...well i got the chords to the song...Well if u want it or want to know ask me and i'll see first....hehehe.But I was really satisfied with it after reading and singing it out loud...and probably my tears is tryina come out but i told myself not to cuz if not.I can't fast.Why i cried?Was bacause its really hard to forget bout him...Its like he's a part of my heart and when u wanna forget him its like ripping a part of your heart out,u know like wad i mean?!So i controlled:]And one more,revenge is not a cure ppl,it is just a problem which involves hurting feelings...And human shouldn't really been hurt by other human in any other hurtful ways okay??So im saying lets live our lives till the end.Happily and together with the one we love or like.SO PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE:]Oh yea...and i forgot to say dat my english composition is in the "Examiners Model compositions"Im really proud of myself:]